the silent rocks
Gloria B. Yates, Australia
an'ya: The form isn't why
I chose this one, rather was the idea. This haiku ties the rocks, the water,
and the music uniquely together. My suggestions would be something like this:
playing by a pond
Lynn Harris, Australia
soji: I like this poem best because of the humor, the implication that the novice flute player may have been sent out to the garden to practice.